I'm sorry it's taken me so long to read your story.
Love it!
You really do have a knack for the computer and/or gaming world. The basic premise of the game being real and all is a tried and true one, but they often turn boring b/c of that.
Your's definitely isn't. I really like Shane - like I said on fp.com, he's a great mix of geeky and snarky. I like how he's not "oh yeah!" about the game but he's not standing around whining either.
The Game sounds cool too - pretty simple and yet not. I want to meet the other Players!
And I love Zinc (cool name, btw), he's a trip. I can see he causes more trouble than he prevents.
The Key reminded me in passing of that g-wing fic you wrote ages ago. I always loved the premise of that. And of course your love of digimon shows through, but only in all the good ways.
I'm looking forward to more of your story, you're one of the few I know that can so wonderfully manage 1st-person narratives, and I love what I've read so far.
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I'm sorry it's taken me so long to read your story.
Love it!
You really do have a knack for the computer and/or gaming world. The basic premise of the game being real and all is a tried and true one, but they often turn boring b/c of that.
Your's definitely isn't. I really like Shane - like I said on fp.com, he's a great mix of geeky and snarky. I like how he's not "oh yeah!" about the game but he's not standing around whining either.
The Game sounds cool too - pretty simple and yet not. I want to meet the other Players!
And I love Zinc (cool name, btw), he's a trip. I can see he causes more trouble than he prevents.
The Key reminded me in passing of that g-wing fic you wrote ages ago. I always loved the premise of that. And of course your love of digimon shows through, but only in all the good ways.
I'm looking forward to more of your story, you're one of the few I know that can so wonderfully manage 1st-person narratives, and I love what I've read so far.
Thanks for the read ^_^