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silverthunder) wrote2004-02-08 08:24 pm
silverthunder) wrote2004-02-08 08:24 pm
Fic Snipet
This one sort of came out of nowhere... I was thinking about that AU fic I want to write when I'm done with the one I'm already working on, and... this scene smacked me in the face. It's extremely short, but I like it anyway, because it'd be a good way to end a chapter or something.
Evil? Me? Noooo.
"Forget it! I'm *finished* with this stupid place! As soon as we find a way out, I'm gone and you're never seeing me again!"
I wasn't really expecting Ken to attack me, so about all I ended up doing was letting out a startled 'oomph' as my host suddenly grabbed me by the forearms and shoved me back against the wall, pinning me with a really *strong* grip just below both of my wrists and giving me this gaze that sent shivers down my spine.
"You'd better get that idea out of your head," he said softly, in a voice that was too even for someone who looked like he wanted to either rip his captive - that was me - apart or pin him to the floor and ravish him. "You're a part of this now, whether you like it or not. It won't do you any good to try and resist."
*Oh, great...* It helped to pretend there *wasn't* this spark of terror trying to grow to irrational levels as I stared back at Ken, straining against the crazily strong hold on my arms. It helped even more to pretend that thinking about being ravished by Ken wasn't sending a totally different kind of shiver through me, too. I reverted to babbling at that point. "Part of what? Am I supposed to understand what's going on? Because I don't."
"*This*." Ken didn't take his eyes from mine, not even for a second. There was an intensity in them that refused to let me look away either. Yamato could've burst into the room decked out in a frilly tutu and announced that he and Taichi were putting on a ballet on Ken's front lawn and I wouldn't even have been able to point and laugh. "You shouldn't try to back out once you're into something so deep. It'll just pull you right back in - and you might not like being pulled."
At that point, I decided I was officially frightened.
I was also trapped in a small room with an apparently crazy guy who was pinning me to the wall and telling me not to resist, and there probably wouldn't be anyone looking for us for at least another couple of hours.
*Yeah... I think I might be in trouble.*
Comments? Criticism? Both? Neither? I still don't have a concrete plan for this fic, but I'll work out the details in time.
Evil? Me? Noooo.
"Forget it! I'm *finished* with this stupid place! As soon as we find a way out, I'm gone and you're never seeing me again!"
I wasn't really expecting Ken to attack me, so about all I ended up doing was letting out a startled 'oomph' as my host suddenly grabbed me by the forearms and shoved me back against the wall, pinning me with a really *strong* grip just below both of my wrists and giving me this gaze that sent shivers down my spine.
"You'd better get that idea out of your head," he said softly, in a voice that was too even for someone who looked like he wanted to either rip his captive - that was me - apart or pin him to the floor and ravish him. "You're a part of this now, whether you like it or not. It won't do you any good to try and resist."
*Oh, great...* It helped to pretend there *wasn't* this spark of terror trying to grow to irrational levels as I stared back at Ken, straining against the crazily strong hold on my arms. It helped even more to pretend that thinking about being ravished by Ken wasn't sending a totally different kind of shiver through me, too. I reverted to babbling at that point. "Part of what? Am I supposed to understand what's going on? Because I don't."
"*This*." Ken didn't take his eyes from mine, not even for a second. There was an intensity in them that refused to let me look away either. Yamato could've burst into the room decked out in a frilly tutu and announced that he and Taichi were putting on a ballet on Ken's front lawn and I wouldn't even have been able to point and laugh. "You shouldn't try to back out once you're into something so deep. It'll just pull you right back in - and you might not like being pulled."
At that point, I decided I was officially frightened.
I was also trapped in a small room with an apparently crazy guy who was pinning me to the wall and telling me not to resist, and there probably wouldn't be anyone looking for us for at least another couple of hours.
*Yeah... I think I might be in trouble.*
Comments? Criticism? Both? Neither? I still don't have a concrete plan for this fic, but I'll work out the details in time.
Re:
I happen to like it too. You don't see too many Daisuke first person's anymore, which makes it an additional plus.