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I forgot to mention this in the first entry... and since I didn't update until now, I figured I'd just make another post.

I'd wait until tomorrow, but there are a couple of people on my friends list who mentioned that they would like to know as soon as I updated, so... here.

Chapter two of Game Over is up at FictionPress.

Enjoy! And let me know what you think. Bad or good.

On a side note, I am at peace with the postal system again. Life is good.

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Cool. You just added a positive end to a very very long day.

Hooray! :) I'm glad you enjoyed, and that it made your day positive.

Hello. ^^
Game Over is really delightful to read, and I particularly like Shane. Please don't torture him too much in the next few chapters? ^^
But, I don't mind teasing him gently throughout the story.
Heh.

And I wonder, is it my imagination, or is Shane rather good with kids? ^^

Don't... torture... Shane? *blinks*

Well, that destroys ALL my plans for the rest of the story... ;)

Not to worry, you know me and my writing. I don't do the major torture thing. There will be some, but it'll be okay in the end.

I'm really glad you like the story! Hooray! It's so motivating to hear that people are actually reading it and want to see more!

Ack! This is what happens when I don't check sites regularly. I really enjoyed part 2. I didn't realize you'd be introducing ALL of the players in this one...or that they'd all be students at his school. Well, it'll make interactions within and outside of the Game more interesting, I suppose. I look forward to future Shane-torturing as well. *grin* What good is a likable, sympathetic character if you can't do things to him? Oh, yes, and a happy belated birthday!!

Thank you, and thank you again. (for the birthday wishes and the comments on chapter two)

Yeah, most of the reason I introduced all of the Players at once is because it's convenient... But it's also partly because of how I planned out the background of how the Game was going before Shane joined. It involved Tristan and Devon knowing about each other, so it made sense to introduce both of them at this point. And Sasenti was the one who *had* to be introduced, because she's holding Time and I need that plot device, dammnit.

As for them all being students at the school... not really a coincidence. ;) What fun is a game if your players aren't on more or less equal footing?

And yes, there will be more Shane-torturing. :) He's way too adorable not to torture.

Well...if you have to torture Shane, torture Devon too! I love Shane, cos he's soooooo adorable to me.

*cuddles Shane persistently*

*sticks tongue out at Devon* Bleh.

Post the next chapter soon!

Oh, and btw, did you know that your birthday coincide's with Singapore's National Day? ^^

I didn't know, but that's cool. :D

Shane is my lil sweetie. *snuggles him* I love him too.

Devon will be tortured. It'll be later on, and won't be as immediate since the story's in Shane's POV, but he will suffer. :)

The next chapter is still in the process of being written. ^^;; Ehehe... but not to worry, I'll get through it. I'm working on a slightly tricky bit right now, so it's slow going, but it'll be up as soon as it's finished.

^^
Yay. I'm glad Devon will suffer. ^_________^
He deserves it for groping Shane so quickly the moment he made his appearance.(It's only the 2nd chapter!)
He has nerve, alright.

*cuddles Shane more*

*cough* Yeah, Devon is pretty aggressive. It only means that he LIKES Shane, though. ^^;

There will probably be more groping in later chapters, but despite all evidence to the contrary, Devon's really not a bad guy. It's just that when he sets a goal, he'll do anything it takes to reach it.

Anyway, though, Shane's a cutie. ;) Can't really blame Devon, hm?

Of course Shane's a cutie~! ^^

I'm not saying that Devon's a bad guy or sth, but...
*feels protective of Shane*

Waaaaaaaahhhh~
*cuddles Shane more*

I have a great weak spot for my fav. adorable characters...
>.>;;; I suspect it won't be too long b4 I try to kidnap Shane...like I often tried with D-chan's Raanan....

Back to Serious Business though, I solemnly raise both hands voting to Spite Devon other than to torture him.

Whee~

Unfortunately, I cannot allow you to kidnap Shane. ^^ I'd never get the story finished if you did.

I'm getting all kinds of ideas to continue this long-term... I don't know if I actually will - I'll have to see how I feel when I get near the end of it - but the ideas are there.

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