silverthunder | (no subject)

Hah! And hah again! I found the song file thing for download. So there. I wasn't really enthusiastic about buying it, truthfully. But now I have it anyway, so it's all good.

Haha.

I have a request to make of anyone who is good with constructive criticism. I just posted chapter three of Game Over, but the illusion scene that takes up the second half of the chapter has so many problems it's not even funny. I know it needs to be fixed, but I'm having trouble thinking of *how*. If anyone has suggestions, I would appreciate it very much.

I want the story to be good, that's all...

Anyway, that aside, I got to watch a lot of FMA episodes I've already seen with the guy from the anime club who wanted to see them. I think I've decided that the 5th Laboratory arc is my favorite - just going by what I've seen so far.

I watched episode 36 today. As glad as I am that Winry is no longer traveling with Ed and Al, I feel sorry for her at the moment. That's just not the kind of thing you want to hear.

Meh. Back to work. Editing. Yargh...