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silverthunder) wrote2002-07-17 10:02 am
silverthunder) wrote2002-07-17 10:02 am
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I really need to watch more anime. I wish stuff would download faster. Oh well...
I've totally revised the plot of my original story. Instead of having the characters stumble in knowing nothing about other worlds or anything, I've decided that they know about other world, but have never heard of the BorderLands, even though they pass through it briefly every time they go to and from various worlds. They're experts at finding people and places. And... they know Omen already as well. That's where I'd have slash in there, because Brian's already in love with Omen. Yay! So I can make it really sweet and meaningful and everyone reading it will drown in sap. I rock.
It'll also be darker than my original plan.
Anyway, Brian, Tatyana, and Omen are brought to the BorderLands to find the missing Keys. Brian and Tatyana travel with Drew, and Omen travels with Dash (and Tyr, when he shows up). When they meet up, they only have two Keys with them. Omen had gotten some answers out of a pocket demon called Riauden, and he figured out where the third Key was. Unfortunately he's supposed to figure it out, and they suck his mind out of his body when he goes looking for it. When the others come to save him, the demons use Brian's feelings for Omen to get his soul and make him give up the other two keys.
Or something like that.
I haven't totally fine-tuned it, but I'm working on that. I like this idea better than my other one - this one is more exciting.
I've totally revised the plot of my original story. Instead of having the characters stumble in knowing nothing about other worlds or anything, I've decided that they know about other world, but have never heard of the BorderLands, even though they pass through it briefly every time they go to and from various worlds. They're experts at finding people and places. And... they know Omen already as well. That's where I'd have slash in there, because Brian's already in love with Omen. Yay! So I can make it really sweet and meaningful and everyone reading it will drown in sap. I rock.
It'll also be darker than my original plan.
Anyway, Brian, Tatyana, and Omen are brought to the BorderLands to find the missing Keys. Brian and Tatyana travel with Drew, and Omen travels with Dash (and Tyr, when he shows up). When they meet up, they only have two Keys with them. Omen had gotten some answers out of a pocket demon called Riauden, and he figured out where the third Key was. Unfortunately he's supposed to figure it out, and they suck his mind out of his body when he goes looking for it. When the others come to save him, the demons use Brian's feelings for Omen to get his soul and make him give up the other two keys.
Or something like that.
I haven't totally fine-tuned it, but I'm working on that. I like this idea better than my other one - this one is more exciting.