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Aphrael ([personal profile] silverthunder) wrote2003-09-18 07:25 am

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Well, I slept in and have ten minutes to write this entry. Heh... stupid. Oh well... that's what I get for signing up for eight o'clock classes. Bleh.

Eh, whatever.

Anyway, I posted that one-shot last night, so you can find it at ffnet here, or mmorg here. Or on my site, of course. The ffnet version is edited to be lemon-free.

Once again, if anyone wants to read this and give me feedback, I would very much appreciate it. The couple's not everyone's favorite, so I'm not expecting many reviews, but I'm honestly attached to this one. I think it went really well. So anything anyone has to say is welcome.

Anyway, I gotta run to class now.

Wow

[identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com 2003-09-18 12:33 pm (UTC)(link)
It shows that you really put your all into that story (not like your other stories aren't just as skilled). But I can see why you're so proud of it.

Your stories were what actually got me hooked on taishiro. You write it really well, though I'm sure you know that. The only pairing I like as much is yamajyou - if you started writing that I'd probably pass out from joy (not hinting at anything, I'm just saying).

I like the way you started with Tai fretting over the way Sora picked Matt instead. I always thought that was kind of mean. You really did a wonderful job with tai and izzy, I enjoyed every single moment of your story.

I'll have to read it again, and as always I look forward to your next work. I'm really enjoying Flare so far, and I'm really curious about Gameover.

I'll stop rambling now - but Two Way Street was masterful. You rock.