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[silverthunder]

Well, I slept in and have ten minutes to write this entry. Heh... stupid. Oh well... that's what I get for signing up for eight o'clock classes. Bleh.

Eh, whatever.

Anyway, I posted that one-shot last night, so you can find it at ffnet here, or mmorg here. Or on my site, of course. The ffnet version is edited to be lemon-free.

Once again, if anyone wants to read this and give me feedback, I would very much appreciate it. The couple's not everyone's favorite, so I'm not expecting many reviews, but I'm honestly attached to this one. I think it went really well. So anything anyone has to say is welcome.

Anyway, I gotta run to class now.

Comments

[ashna.livejournal.com]

The fic was CUUUUTE!!!!

wai wai wai

Loved it dearly. Now I'm goping to be late for school... *zips off*

[silverthunder]

Thanks! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Wow

[maderr.livejournal.com]

It shows that you really put your all into that story (not like your other stories aren't just as skilled). But I can see why you're so proud of it.

Your stories were what actually got me hooked on taishiro. You write it really well, though I'm sure you know that. The only pairing I like as much is yamajyou - if you started writing that I'd probably pass out from joy (not hinting at anything, I'm just saying).

I like the way you started with Tai fretting over the way Sora picked Matt instead. I always thought that was kind of mean. You really did a wonderful job with tai and izzy, I enjoyed every single moment of your story.

I'll have to read it again, and as always I look forward to your next work. I'm really enjoying Flare so far, and I'm really curious about Gameover.

I'll stop rambling now - but Two Way Street was masterful. You rock.

Re: Wow

[silverthunder]

Okay, I don't think you're on my Friends list, which means I'll be going to add you as soon as I finish this post. Anyway...

Thank you very much for your comment. I *really* apprecaite the feedback - and you telling me I hooked you on Taishiro gives me a nice warm glow. Powers of conversion! Mwah! Yamajyou is a pretty pairing, too - I have a very nice doujin with them. They were a side couple in No Such Thing and briefly mentioned in Time After Time... Maybe I'll give them a little more focus in future fics. We'll see if the muse strikes me.

I don't think Sora was *particularly* mean, but her rejection of Taichi wasn't very tactful. Unless she didn't know about his feelings... (she'd have to be pretty oblivious if she didn't, though) But she as much as said "Yamato's a better catch than you are." Bleh.

I'm glad you liked Flare, and I'll try to get Game Over out fairly soon. (I need to figure out how many parts it'll have)

Again, thanks a million for the comments!

[pichi.livejournal.com]

Well, I think for the most part you've got the characters IC... there were a couple of moments like when Matt burst out laughing at the dinner, or more notably Izzy being so quick to agree to sex, that struck me as off, but overall you do a nice job, especially with Matt.

It was nice getting the first person perspective, too, as opposed to a third person omniscient. It puts the reader more in the action of the story. I wish you RPed! ;_; Your characterizations are a lot better than most people's.

[silverthunder]

Thanks. ^_^ I appreciate the input, especially the notes on those little moments that seemed OOC. (the Matt thing *was* kind of off... maybe I should've had him snicker, smirk, or raise an eyebrow instead) Izzy's... maybe you're right. *ponders* In trying to make the point about the adventurous/cautious thing, I probably slipped there.

I do first-person every now and then. ^_^ Actually, this is the second Taishiro I've done from a first-person perspective (third if you count the Hikari POV one) and both have been Taichi's perspective. Koushiro is harder to write accurately, I think.

Thanks a million for your comment! :D But believe me, I'd be a bad RP-er. I'm too lazy and would avoid posting too much.