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[silverthunder]

Well, I slept in and have ten minutes to write this entry. Heh... stupid. Oh well... that's what I get for signing up for eight o'clock classes. Bleh.

Eh, whatever.

Anyway, I posted that one-shot last night, so you can find it at ffnet here, or mmorg here. Or on my site, of course. The ffnet version is edited to be lemon-free.

Once again, if anyone wants to read this and give me feedback, I would very much appreciate it. The couple's not everyone's favorite, so I'm not expecting many reviews, but I'm honestly attached to this one. I think it went really well. So anything anyone has to say is welcome.

Anyway, I gotta run to class now.

Comments

[pichi.livejournal.com]

Well, I think for the most part you've got the characters IC... there were a couple of moments like when Matt burst out laughing at the dinner, or more notably Izzy being so quick to agree to sex, that struck me as off, but overall you do a nice job, especially with Matt.

It was nice getting the first person perspective, too, as opposed to a third person omniscient. It puts the reader more in the action of the story. I wish you RPed! ;_; Your characterizations are a lot better than most people's.

[silverthunder]

Thanks. ^_^ I appreciate the input, especially the notes on those little moments that seemed OOC. (the Matt thing *was* kind of off... maybe I should've had him snicker, smirk, or raise an eyebrow instead) Izzy's... maybe you're right. *ponders* In trying to make the point about the adventurous/cautious thing, I probably slipped there.

I do first-person every now and then. ^_^ Actually, this is the second Taishiro I've done from a first-person perspective (third if you count the Hikari POV one) and both have been Taichi's perspective. Koushiro is harder to write accurately, I think.

Thanks a million for your comment! :D But believe me, I'd be a bad RP-er. I'm too lazy and would avoid posting too much.