silverthunder: (Luna - Looking to the future)
Aphrael ([personal profile] silverthunder) wrote2005-05-20 08:01 pm

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I finished my AMV, and anyone who's interested can download it! The anime is Uninhabited Planet Survive, and the song is "What it Feels like For a Girl (dance remix)" by Madonna. The video is a tribute to the girls of UPS.

I used footage from all over the place in the anime, so watch out for that if you're leary of spoilers. Not that you'll know what's going on or anything, but... well, just in case.

For those who are members at AnimeMusicVideos.org, I have it available here, and for those who aren't, you can get it here.

Either way, if you do decide to watch it, opinions are appreciated. It's my first attempt, so I'm a little nervous - but I'd really like to hear what people think of it.

[identity profile] framwinkle.livejournal.com 2005-05-22 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
I liked some parts in the second half, too. I just thought it could have flowed better, and been tied a little closer to the pace of the music. Also, to help keep things coherent, you might consider trying to tell a bit of a story with it, as well. The clips could have been grouped into themes, of sorts, that would then be put in order to follow each other in some sort of logical progression like:

-Girls in normal settings
-Girls encountering trouble/feeling down
-Girls struggling/fighting back
-Girls winning victory
-Girls at rest/peace

Honestly, it may not be a good idea for some videos, and it can always be overdone, but I think it helps in many of the other videos I have seen. Maybe it's just something to think about for the next one.