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[silverthunder]

Well, yesterday I got a nice big chunk of work done on my original fic, and decided to post the first part. I'm having a lot of fun with this!

Anyway, though, for anyone who's interested, you can find the first part of Game Over here.

I'll also be putting it up on my site very soon.

Yeah, I really like this one. I actually think it's coming along great. So any comments are much appreciated. Any at all.

Other than that, I watched episode eight of Fullmetal Alchemist yesterday. I've decided that I definitely prefer manga Winry to anime Winry. I get flashbacks from about a million other anime females when faced with anime Winry. Manga Winry was way more fun.

I liked that episode, though. Not too bad.

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Re: Game Over

[silverthunder]

You like it! :D Oh, this makes me happy! I seriously crave comments on this one, since it's a lot of fun to write and I really like it, myself.

I have a knack for the gaming world? That's funny, because I'm not a gamer. At all. I don't even role play. That's why I made Shane dislike gaming - and his character grew around that.

You will meet the other Players in part two. ;) In fact, that's pretty much what part two is entirely about - meeting the other Players. The real action starts in part three... which I really should work on.

And, Zinc is wonderful. He's another character who grew while I was writing, and he became very fun.

Actually, I wasn't thinking about that GW fic when I came up with the Key. ^^;; Ehe... I guess I just like keys.

I'm thrilled that you like it, and glad the first-person is working for you. For some reason, I really enjoy writing first-person...

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it!