Game Over update
Jun. 8th, 2013 10:22 amI posted a new chapter of Game Over on FictionPress. It will be up on my website shortly.
Funny thing with this chapter... I got a surge of inspiration in May, and spent several days working on the second half of it (the first half had been done a while back). Then I spent several days editing it. And then I decided to leave it for a few days and come back to it...
The Vegas trip came up, and then some other stuff, and then Fire Emblem... yeah. This sat for a while.
But as a result, I got to come at it somewhat cold, and so I had a better notion of how everything flowed together as a chapter. I managed to find a few more problem areas that I hadn't noticed before. So now it's up, and I can focus on the next chapter.
Hopefully those who are still interested enjoy this one! Let me know if you have any comments or suggestions for improvement.
Funny thing with this chapter... I got a surge of inspiration in May, and spent several days working on the second half of it (the first half had been done a while back). Then I spent several days editing it. And then I decided to leave it for a few days and come back to it...
The Vegas trip came up, and then some other stuff, and then Fire Emblem... yeah. This sat for a while.
But as a result, I got to come at it somewhat cold, and so I had a better notion of how everything flowed together as a chapter. I managed to find a few more problem areas that I hadn't noticed before. So now it's up, and I can focus on the next chapter.
Hopefully those who are still interested enjoy this one! Let me know if you have any comments or suggestions for improvement.